So Many Broken Hearts Comments

This is a really uplifting poem that make you want to break free of all ties and start everything all over again. Utterly unfettering in all release... this poem not only clips and chinks away at the corporeal bonds but also the ethereal ones too... freeing your body, mind, heart, spirit and soul.. so you can step into the sunshine from the rain and glisten irrdescently for a moment. So joyous and full of glee that the exuberance just leaps for the page and make you dance to it merry tune. Very rhythmatic and flowing this one is! Just one small typo I think in line 6? should the line not start with from not form? Both fit but Form would link the previous line whilst from is mor epresent in the line it is presented in? Other than that my friend this is very good indeed! Dale :)

flooded with positivity.. reflects the state of a broken as well as a hopeful heart.. while reading it the flow somehow made an impression that there's a connection building between both the states of heart.. the hopeful and the one which has lost all hope.. nice write.. truly like it..