So Long, Yet Far Away (M. V.) Comments

love always seems to work that way doesn't it. just when you think they are the one and you seem so happy, it gets stripped from you. very touching and heartfelt piece.

oh, oh, tsk, tsk, thought it had a happy ending..nevertheless, this is a lovely and romantic

Love at first sight.... sigh. Have you thought about a novel? ? ? T

That was simply awesome....I loved it

simply and truly beautiful! your poem makes me smile, you are a true poet

simply very great thanks

Wolfey, you say you're one of the few poets in modern time who write in rhythm and rhyme - inded you are and this great work of words and beat is sensational. The rhyme flows not only from the pen but from the heart deeply and it's all so so sweet. Easily a 10 from me, when I can vote - i hope I can.

Life is filled with series of disappointments one successful wish is fulfillment great job Sir, sathya narayana

Poignant...can't decide if the sadness should be real though...but decidely, I think we have all experienced seeing someone and feeling a 'connection' only to find it never develops...real, or wishful thinking...who's to say...provocative...Coach

This is so beautifully written Greenwolfe, and such a pleasure to read. the flow was excellent and the sentiment a delight. Well done indeed. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

Great poem. You're a really good poet.

this beautiful poem is both classical and modern at the same time...what a delight to read...great work.

This one is a definite winner.

Beautiful as beautiful as the girl in the poem. Reminded me my own poem A THING OF BEAUTY. But this is too good.

i love this one! ! it was soothing and yet it made me want to read more!

I think that some of the longest lasting loves are those that we keep within our hearts...and only within our hearts... Nicely done Wolfey! hugs, dee

I enjoy your style of writing, with clear concise descriptions that make the reader visualize the story in the mind's eye. The content was very enjoyable. A 10 from me...Jeannie.

What a wonderfully written piece - the glow of that season just shines through beautifully...

This is a brilliant work and a kind of passion flows from line to line so long yet far away... Rema