Saturday, January 9, 2016

So Long Ago Comments

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Upon the fly-leaf of this tiny book,
She had inscribed:

"To thee, who lost a love as I,
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Lynn W. Petty
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Bri Edwards 11 March 2016

ok, I now see 129 listed. “A disquieting sensation sat upon my heart, That she had lived in solitude Within the shadow of the shatter Of her dreams. There is no separation between the soul And its deep pain, except the grand sweep Of passing time, which does not erase But, only softens sorrow.” some nice alliterations, above. ssssssses galore! you old softie! if she had had television, internet, and a microwave oven, they might have done a better job of softening the sorrow. bri :) maybe not. “

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Manonton Dalan 16 January 2016

very nice poem ////////////

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 January 2016

Softness of sorrows sweeps the memory. Very amazing sharing done definitely.10

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Lynn W. Petty

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