Sunday, January 11, 2009

So Long Comments

Rating: ★2.0

I trusted him
But thats gone.
He ruined my life
Felt as though he cut me with a knife.
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Sara Smith
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Brooke Lynn Moore 11 January 2009

I think this one may leave a little too much for the readers to figure out. It has a good theme and an apparent style of writing but it feels as though it needs to be finished.

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Sara Smith

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Florida
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Florida
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