Tuesday, August 9, 2016

So It's Your Day Comments

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So it's your day, all right okay,
let it be a day of beauty and charms.
I have brought a new dress for you,
a set of colorful bangles,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Rajnish Manga 10 August 2016

Perfect romantic scene enacted in a traditional family setting with a friendly and naughty give and take. Such an intricate expression of emotions made with such a remarkable ease can only be done by a master craftsman who is none other than the poet, Janab Akhtar Jawad Sahab. Thank you so much, indeed.

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Valsa George 10 August 2016

Beautiful......! I love the naughty tone and the hot romance!

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Khalida Bano Ali 09 August 2016

A beautiful poem relaxing the tensions of the nerves.

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Kelly Kurt 09 August 2016

Ulterior motives? : -) A lovely poem, Akhtar

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Nosheen Irfan 09 August 2016

What a lovely write, exuding warmth and romance. Enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing.

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