Wednesday, February 3, 2016

So It's A New Morning Comments

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so its a new morning
I can hear the birds chirping, still having hangover from yesterdays
party, now every break up seems like a party, they say love is life, but for me love has always been chimeric, for me friends have been life
and friendship, a madness, I have always loved their company, we all know of the story of the moth and the flame
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Hezekiah Toheeb Tiamiyu 01 April 2016

I love this, I love the use of imagery and the strong presence of enjambment.... and the story was well passed....lovely

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Indranil Bhaduri 09 February 2016

Beautiful. Realisation..romanticism, self introspection, feelings, thoughts, expressions.. all blended. Great write friend.

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Patricia Grantham 04 February 2016

An interesting write on love and life. There is always another day to start all over again. Nice.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 February 2016

nice one.. i wrote just now...life is not easy....19 Never get fear And bear calmly with full faith Till the arrival of death Life shall take you And sail through All hurdles With less struggle

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