Wednesday, February 6, 2013

So I Ran Away Comments

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So I ran away
Not knowing how hard it would be, or not caring to know
You pleaded for me not to go
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Savita Tyagi
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Luo Zhihai 30 August 2020

But the spring will come The ice will melt And the stream of love will flow again The spring will melt; the ice. It gives people infinite hope. Let's celebrate Spring!

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Dimitrios Galanis 13 February 2016

The scenes one after the other paint the feelings as should verses do.A fluency to admire in wording the tenderness of feelings in remorse.Though long enough you insist to the end.It proves the attraction ot its worthness.

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 07 February 2013

desires, hopes and reality are so blurred to we realize sometimes, even if we are on the right track and you have deliver it with an extraordinary way very nice poem, love to read it learn alot things from it thanks for share it

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