Sunday, November 15, 2015

So I Keep Coming Comments

Rating: 5.0

by lakes lips
kissing few astray
balls from cruel clubs
broken tees littered
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Manonton Dalan
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C. P. Sharma 15 November 2015

A medley mix up of romance and tastes and original imagery. Lovely write with rhythmic beat.

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Ari Alsio 15 November 2015

Falling leaves, but have you ever seen the squirrel slips?

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Manonton Dalan

Manonton Dalan

virginia, usa
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