Thursday, October 24, 2013

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Rating: 4.5

Do you want to do it?
I'm not sure, I say, 'yes.'
Vortex swirling below.
Every inch closer says DO IT.
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Sandra Regan
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Neela Nath Das 26 November 2013

It is not a light poem indeed.Very subtle and profound message is served, I think.Good one.

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Connor Whyte 24 October 2013

This is a pretty intense poem I like how you put it together, Can't live in fear or you will never make it, Great write.

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Gajanan Mishra 24 October 2013

killed the fear, good write, thanks.

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