Thursday, August 24, 2006

So He Never Did! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Jim said he'd take her for a stroll.
Then they'd have tea and toad-in-the-hole,
But they wouldn't let him out on parole,
So he never did!
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Ernestine Northover
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Andrew Blakemore 14 December 2009

A lovely structure and beautifully written Ernestine. A fast-flowing piece. Love, Andrew xx

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Duncan Wyllie 25 August 2006

Ah! ! She got there in the end, reached her man with a wonderful plan, ..And she did! ! ! Lovely Ernestine Top quality poetry, from a top quality poetess! ! ! 10 without fail! ! Love duncan X

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 24 August 2006

Hello Ernestine...Liked this a lot.clever scheme, amusing and an ending that lets just say tickles ones fancy in a good way.aS ALWAYS, JOB WELL DONE'''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Catastrophe King 24 August 2006

I wonder what did Ken discover and what actually did transpire..... This indeed is a very matured write - you do well witth words and so with expressions! VERY GOOD WORK - 10!

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