Friday, June 15, 2007

So Fine-Spun Comments

Rating: 5.0

I watched a bubble float into the air,
Shining its translucent colours so fine-spun.
Then others followed along its thoroughfare,
Rising up into the heavens, one by one.
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Ernestine Northover
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Andrew Blakemore 14 December 2009

This took me right back to my childhood Ernestine, I was also fascinated by the liquid bubbles I blew. A truly beautiful depiction. Love, Andrew xx

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Ahhhhh, young lass...Good to see you on line, and quilling fine imagework that can be confused as being palpable! Very Nice work, Poetess E.! I MISS YOUR DAILY APPEARANCES... FjR

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Lillian J. 15 June 2007

Eloquently lovely work, Ernestine! Lilly :)

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Sandra Fowler 15 June 2007

You saw something beautiful from your window on the world. Thank you for sharing it with your readers. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Marci Made 15 June 2007

What a marvelous happy, light poem for a beautiful summer day..What you've done with the beauty of a bubble here is extaordinary...Your descriptions are captivating..A lovely poem....thanks for sharing it..........marci, xo

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