So Far Yet So Near Comments
Close your eyes and breathe in slowly.
Smile a bit and picture me mentally.
When I do this routine the distances vanish,
feeling of being miles apart seem to banish.
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great imagery..... I could imagine the beaches in mumbai, although i have never been there.......Really enjoyed! ! ! reflects the feelings, sedate within a heart, beautifully, in a mellifluous voice as this is more often i can call a beautiful song sang in pen& paper.....
A fantastic dream of fantasy well brought out. Thanks for the kind invitation.I feel you have a great world or poetry before you.Very best wishes. Chandra Thiagarajan
Very beautiful........ Spinin around us is the whole world Evrythin blurrs off as our eyes.meet.... Turnin pink I look away, cudnt stop Myself from stealin another glimpse...... Each of ur lines z magical.... Loved it! !
very beautiful..........dreamy and fantasized..........a bit imagery lots of imagination and emotions make your poem a complete one :)
Very romantic. The opening lines are meditative and sweet.
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9/6/2025 3:57:18 AM # 1.0.0
wow... great poem. I like it, it's kewl Keep writing XD