Friday, February 28, 2014

So Empty Is My Heart... Comments

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So empty is my heart…
As if, she never loved and hoped;
As if, she has stopped…
What love will make her start?
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Mihaela Pirjol
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Unnikrishnan E S 28 February 2022

When you start to speak of your heart as an alien ‘SHE", the whole world takes a new shape and hue. That is when you write, " I had to kill her love, —instead From my life I to depart." Words cringe for expression here! Marvellous.

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M Asim Nehal 11 November 2020

SUPERBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBB So empty is my heart… One day, she will understand: — The pains I went through By then I am gone only my love will haunt...

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Terry Craddock 27 October 2020

I wrote the poem 'Casanova Plays Violin Heart Strings', inspired by the poem 'So Empty Is My Heart...', by the poet Mihaela Pirjol and dedicated to the poet Mihaela Pirjol.

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Terry Craddock 10 October 2020

The split images 'Caterpillar Eating Energy: To Transform Into Pupa Chrysalis', 'Caterpillar To Butterfly Metamorphosis Birth', 'Butterfly Life Is Like Fluttering Love Life' and the poem 'Regeneration Of Broken Heart Strings' were all inspired by the poem 'So Empty Is My Heart...' by the poet Mihaela Pirjol and dedicated to the poet Mihaela Pirjol.

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Terry Craddock 10 October 2020

Miracles Wait For Those Who Take Time To See if you believe if you choose to see miracles miracles will real time happen before your eyes metamorphosis of hearts souls is happening it is happening now silent silent listen listen if you close eyes choose not to see you are blind choose to see life renewal possibilities miracle life Inspired by the poem 'So Empty Is My Heart...' by the poet Mihaela Pirjol. Dedicated to the poet Mihaela Pirjol.

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Terry Craddock 10 October 2020

Leaf Fallen Love how leaf are our lives how easily is heart impaled how easily is all love lost Inspired by the poem 'So Empty Is My Heart...' by the poet Mihaela Pirjol. Dedicated to the poet Mihaela Pirjol.

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Terry Craddock 10 October 2020

Life Recycles Life Renews Broken Hearts an empty heart a hollowed out heart is a stillborn heart in danger of implosion collapsing violently inward death in a broken heart a life sudden stripped bare devoid of heartbeat love hope a heart stopped sliced between heart beats silent frozen to die between heartbeats impaled upon lost love is past regeneration start it must be remade anew life cycles life renews Dedicated to the poet Mihaela Pirjol.

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Terry Craddock 10 October 2020

Casanova Plays Violin Heart Strings who rules the heart who captures heart who captures hearts with Casanova lines a line among lines a line worth more than all others a line which plays the heart like a violin is a line which soul echoes haunts the broken strings strings of love lost beware those who choose to be played by players get played Inspired by the poem 'So Empty Is My Heart...' by the poet Mihaela Pirjol. Dedicated to the poet Mihaela Pirjol.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 September 2018

Give my life and joy in rhythm, Kill me not before The End! Don't you see that I am dead, When my love belongs to them? .....so touching. What a great poem on love lost. Thanks u dear madam for this gem.10

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Terry Craddock 06 December 2016

'I sense the voiceless screaming; ' a line among lines, a line worth more than all others, a line which plays the heart like a violin, is a line which echoes haunts the broken strings of love lost

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 May 2016

Like i never was. Nice piece of work.

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Savita Tyagi 06 November 2014

Loved the rhythm of this poem. loved your Tanka too.

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