So Different Comments

Hold on to your sanity. Don’t be discouraged, Mark, thinking you’re some square. You’re not. Simply put, you are unique - beautiful and special in the eyes of God. In this piece, you’ve done a great job in expressing yourself with imagery, befitting to portray your deep sentiments.

Again, why the reference to agedness? You have hardly reached there yet, believe me. And why the double spacing? It is well done though. Adeline

That was so moving Mark! I really liked it