Monday, September 21, 2009

So Close Your Eyes Comments

Rating: ★5.0

So close your eyes
And remember those innocent moments
I'm searching for a child who disappeared
The clouds disperse
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . 27 September 2009

I enjoyed this poem Ahmad. A fitting dedication for a fine poet. 10 love Karin

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 26 September 2009

Oh those wonderful innocent moments of childhood that your poem captured! nice read Ahmad

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Rajaram Ramachandran 21 September 2009

A touch of true love is clear from this song.

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Eyan Desir 21 September 2009

I hope she loves this Cause I do... 10s

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Ravi A 21 September 2009

A good thought. Fine diction. What is this 'hysterical crescent moon? '. This image is rather a disturbing one from my point of view. Crescent moon has very pleasing tones and void of hysteria.

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Marieta Maglas 21 September 2009

nice lyric poem, nice symbolistic portrait, lovely to read..............10++++

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Rafique Farooqi 21 September 2009

Very innocent feelings for born love.......wonderful dedication

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
Ahmad Shiddiqi
Ahmad Shiddiqi
Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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