So Close To Your Soul - 1 Comments
So close to your soul
On this lonely night
Mourning sun awaits
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Nice poem with philosophical undertone, A soulful journey towards the end.5****
Very much appreciate your understanding of this poem, my friend! Asim, your constructive criticism is ALWAYS very much appreciated! Thank You for taking the time to do that!
I have never seen 'Mourning Sun' what for it Mourns? If you meant by Solar eclipse it may make some sense.
Give it some meaningful thought...it will make sense to you. I never ever write ANY poems that I don't give lots of thought to! Poetic Sky, I value your opinion and love your poetry. You are one of the poets that will continue to raise many stars!
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8/11/2025 5:15:12 PM # 1.0.0
The human soul long for love and hungers when it is empty, particularly on a lonely night, but I wouldn't like to see a mourning sun.
Love your very insightful coment, David!