Sunday, September 20, 2009

So Close To That Dream Comments

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I know you're strong
you will move on
whatever the pain
whatever the game
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javier hernandez
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Jean Dament 20 September 2009

Encouraging words are spoken in this lovely poem. You have some errors: your-you're, what ever-whatever, past-pass, its- it's, cant-can't, to-too. Ravensong

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