Wednesday, November 14, 2018

So Close Comments

Rating: 4.8

A little taste of Heaven.
I can't tell where I end, and you begin.
A stomach rumbles.
Was that yours, or mine?
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Ray Hansell 28 November 2018

I like this very much

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Practicing Poetess 28 November 2018

But of course you would, you're a man! It never fails to amaze me how the guys are first to read my slightly 'heady' poetry! Seriously, thanks for commenting, Ray! : -)

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Michael Walkerjohn 20 November 2018

Aloha Practicing Poetess... Sounds like my backyard hammock... and a tall pitcher of 'sun' tea! Florida Room? Heaven rumbles end bliss begin yours or mine ends Fulfillment sublime Nothing like the dazed first collaboration... Nice prose poetess! All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two

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Michael Walkerjohn 20 November 2018

Say Poetess... throw a title at this Senryu and fly it... maybe put a note for me in the story line?

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Practicing Poetess 21 November 2018

Although my readers cannot see, I always blush when a new male member Reads my most poetry! Aloha to you, too! There are at least 2 Michael Walkers on this site, and now a Michael Walkerjohn, too!

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Flower Prince 14 November 2018

We are close towards heaven. Great job is done.

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Practicing Poetess 14 November 2018

Thank you, Flower Prince!

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