No reaction
For people's action
As they may offer
With ach point to differ
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It was alright. Molly Breese24 minutes ago The wording seemed a bit off to me in a couple passages (such as It is crowd in passage two) . Otherwise the poem was well written, with a good topic.
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Carry on.... with the good work...... Donut Girl21 minutes ago Regardless :) Comment +1