Wednesday, July 2, 2008

So, Am I What You Want Comments

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my truths lack brutality
and yet even my gentle honesty pains you.
you blend me in..to your couch, wall, potplants-
see me again..
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adele le keur
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ngaio beck 23 July 2008

A succinct summation of the evolution of most romances.Well put.

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Bill Thomas 06 July 2008

The feelings evoked by the poem, like those that inspired it, are almost beyond words - thank you for beginning to articulate them.

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Alan Pieterse 03 July 2008

sad... like flowers withering.

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adele le keur

adele le keur

cape town, south africa
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