Saturday, October 25, 2008

So Alone Comments

Rating: 4.5

Alone I sit
Longing to be held
Feeling empty inside
And alone there I dwelled
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Shelby Lanier
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Paul Stertz 25 October 2008

Your poem really gets the mood across, it struck a chord with me. I especially like the last stanza 'Like clothing to my skin, ' great line!

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Shelby Lanier

Shelby Lanier

Raliegh, North Carolina
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