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A deep, dark and powerful poem with several memorable phrases uncontrollable sideshow. As Susan says, the reader is immediately impaled and does not wish to wriggle off. Definitely one of my favourites.

Downfall. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

erase the visual impact of an uncontrollable slideshow worming its way deep into my subconscious... is absolutely brilliant. Like to read more of you. Thanks for sharing.

Darkly, disturbingly brilliant. So evocative, I feel something crawling in my head. Perhaps it is your poetry. Perhaps it is my own architect of self-destruction. Again, brilliant execution, Annette.