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let's wait for the day...but i think this creator is an artist of different sorts!

Its perfectly fine Ma'am. Thank you for that elaboration. Lovely write.

evil people are adept at betrayal Good people seen off and off scene Rest of the mortals remain sceptical Mother Earth is at her best balancing Wheeling rebirths are nature's reviving trial The creator is yet to be at self portrayal ...this is on the mystery of life...is that o.k Kranti andRanjit

Interesting write. Open line gave it a nice start. Nice diction. But I didn't got your third line. On whole good one.

I couldn't get your intent as you intended. Can you please explain it to me ma'am?

Symbolic write...dual meaning any where inside? very intelligently composed...and on the last two lines- i must quote Bhagavat Gita- 'Yadha Yadha Hi Dharmasya' and the rest of that Sloka...10