Monday, January 30, 2012

Snuff The Flame Comments

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Snuff the flame
dimly present
Rendered glimmer
against the night
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Danny Draper
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Lenore Lee 16 February 2012

Beautiful. I love this poem about keeping the light of day, of hope within yourself; to just breathe it in and continue when times get dark. Nice.

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Unwritten Soul 14 February 2012

Your poem remind me of something...i can relate this to many things...but there is hope at the end of the dawn...ray of hope, light of shine, shine from sun! ! ...nice_Unwritten Soul

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Kiama, New South Wales, Australia
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