Snowy White Comments

The poem is so gentle and i feel like watching a flower moving with fallen petal..so subtle in every move while the background was so scary.Nice poem Tom!

Hi Tom, you have the capacity to describe the most cataclysmic events with such simple and vividly descriptive words that you put the reader in the heart of your scenario- excellent. I like this very much indeed! ...10 +++ Lodigiana x

A sad poem depicting the end of life. Well penned.10