Sunday, August 20, 2006

Snowglobe Comments

Rating: 5.0

Slowly stroll,
into that tiny city,
with wooden dolls
and plastic trees.
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Sylvia Thomas
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Dee Daffodil 06 September 2006

L.O.S...I love this poem...you are very talented. Whjat an interesting perspective to take...what a fantstic journey it would make...to be ohhh so small, and be able to fit in tiny places. Love the imagery! Hugs, Dee

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Perfection Is Flawed 21 August 2006

Beautiful. The details of the beauty within a snowglobe, the wooden dolls, the plastic trees, the rounded glass sky, the glitter, is so mesmerizingly portrayed. The last line cuts through, sharply, with the stark reality that is true. Lovely.

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