Tuesday, May 28, 2013

Snowflakes Comments

Rating: 5.0

A chilly blast of air rushes through the trees
They begin to sway to and fro as if in a trance
The skies change from clear blue to a misty gray
Cool air began to rise and then it began to snow
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Patricia Grantham
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Beach Girl 19 September 2013

You paint quite a vivid picture with exquisite words. Love this poem. Gave it a 10

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Noreen Carden 14 September 2013

This is a lovely description of all the wonderful changes that we experience in winter but dont always appreciate well written

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Noreen Carden 14 September 2013

This is a lovely description of all the wonderful changes that we experience in winter but dont always appreciate well written

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Theodora Onken 06 September 2013

This is so very beautiful. From start to finish - and much appreciated as it cooled me down, literally. We are experiencing 100 and above temps here, this day.

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Elena Sandu 20 August 2013

All the pressure gained from an unusual summer heat is soothed away with this poem, I love it, thank you for share!

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Ramesh Rai 02 August 2013

a very imaginative and descriptive write on changing face of nature. it is also made clear that the changes bring refeshness n this nature with our life is renewed. i love the style of writing and choosing common words enabling the common readers to read n understand. a complete poem crafted with high skill n beautiful metaphores. thanks for sharing. with regards

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Adeline Foster 14 July 2013

A lovely, enjoyable poem. read mine - Wide Open Spaces - Adeline

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Heather Wilkins 12 June 2013

a beautiful winter scene.

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R.j. Wynn 11 June 2013

Another great one, what are we going to do with you

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Ken E Hall 10 June 2013

a breath of fresh air this poem on snowflakes with the feeling of the cold around you not much snow in OZ, very nice to read...frozen tears...regards

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Valsa George 08 June 2013

You have beautifully portrayed the changing face of Nature with her rotating cycle of seasons! Even the dull winter is made beautiful by your lovely imagination!

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Neela Nath Das 06 June 2013

Wonderful word-picture.You have taken me there.Fell like frozen tears then warmed by the hands of God- - -terrific line.Amazing.

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Louis Rams 31 May 2013

a beautiful description of the winter snows

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Valerie Dohren 31 May 2013

Beautiful poem Patricia, some lovely lines and very imaginative. A great read.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 29 May 2013

Lovely piece.

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Snow flakes are beautiful. Frozen tears warmed by God. Nicely expressed.

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Patricia Grantham

Patricia Grantham

Moncks Corner, South Carolina
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