A chilly blast of air rushes through the trees
They begin to sway to and fro as if in a trance
The skies change from clear blue to a misty gray
Cool air began to rise and then it began to snow
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This is a lovely description of all the wonderful changes that we experience in winter but dont always appreciate well written
This is a lovely description of all the wonderful changes that we experience in winter but dont always appreciate well written
This is so very beautiful. From start to finish - and much appreciated as it cooled me down, literally. We are experiencing 100 and above temps here, this day.
All the pressure gained from an unusual summer heat is soothed away with this poem, I love it, thank you for share!
a very imaginative and descriptive write on changing face of nature. it is also made clear that the changes bring refeshness n this nature with our life is renewed. i love the style of writing and choosing common words enabling the common readers to read n understand. a complete poem crafted with high skill n beautiful metaphores. thanks for sharing. with regards
A lovely, enjoyable poem. read mine - Wide Open Spaces - Adeline
a breath of fresh air this poem on snowflakes with the feeling of the cold around you not much snow in OZ, very nice to read...frozen tears...regards
You have beautifully portrayed the changing face of Nature with her rotating cycle of seasons! Even the dull winter is made beautiful by your lovely imagination!
Wonderful word-picture.You have taken me there.Fell like frozen tears then warmed by the hands of God- - -terrific line.Amazing.
Beautiful poem Patricia, some lovely lines and very imaginative. A great read.
Snow flakes are beautiful. Frozen tears warmed by God. Nicely expressed.
You paint quite a vivid picture with exquisite words. Love this poem. Gave it a 10