Friday, March 5, 2010

Snowflake Comments

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You've had enough of autumns bleeding
you're more than ready for winters breathing
but remember to remember
that every crunch beneath your shoe
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Bella Luca
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Goldy Locks 14 April 2010

'every crunch beneath your shoe/was once a rustle in the wind'....gorgeous writing, Bella. I agree 100% with C Note.....Keep on. Goldy

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C Note 09 April 2010

Your writing transcends your age. Continue on...

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