Monday, January 19, 2015

Snowfall In The Night For Fabrizio Frosini Comments

Rating: 5.0

The snow had just begun to fall,
thick snowflakes falling
past the restaurant window,
when you whispered, leaning forward,
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Daniel Brick
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Glen Kappy 14 July 2017

nice, daniel. the picture you summon with your words, the lyrical tone, make the whole of this quite vivid and pleasant for me. nice. -glen

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Rahman Henry 10 September 2015

Artistic presentation. A significant poem. Splendid. I've translated this poem into Bengali for our Bangladeshi readers. wishes for the poet.

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Roseann Shawiak 09 March 2015

A beautiful musical reflection mingling in the snow of love, such a delicate and inspiring poem. Definitely classical music style! Thank you, RoseAnn

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Savita Tyagi 07 February 2015

Two poetic minds can create a whole orchestra. Enjoyed the music. Will look for Fabrizio's poem to catch the full rhythm.

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Fabrizio Frosini 19 January 2015

TO THE READERS: as I've written on my 1st comment (see below) , Daniel let me know beforehand, through a message, the text of his poem. When I read it, the association with a musical theme [just a light piece of music, not those elaborate pieces like in Rameau or Gluck's operas..] was right there.. and it took its shape in a few minutes.. Let's say.. sort of Fabrizio Frosini Variations on a theme (Aria) by Daniel J. Brick :) - - - DIVERTISSEMENT - - - [On an Aria by Daniel J. Brick] I. The snow had just begun to fall - thick snowflakes falling past the restaurant window, When, leaning forward - oblivious to anybody but me, She softly whispered to my ear the warmest words of love. II. She whispered those words for me Alone, and the feathery snow kept falling and falling, enveloping the whole of our Universe III. When she whispered to me, in a dreamy voice - 'I want you tonight', The snow was shining as it fell upon us and our dreams alike IV. I grabbed her hands, silently, letting only my eyes speaking: 'I want You too, tonight'. And we let the snow softly covered the whole of the earth, And the dark air was shining with Promises.... (Fabrizio Frosini, January 2015)

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Fabrizio Frosini 19 January 2015

Caro Daniel (dear D.) 3 new poems of yours, today.. and among them the one you told me of - and which you let me know beforehand, through your message. I'm deeply honored, my friend.. Thank you!

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