Friday, November 25, 2005

Snowbound Comments

Rating: 5.0

The bitter cold sapped his strength,
he should have put his thicker coat on,
but now it was too late.
He trudged through the snow, now knee deep,
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Ernestine Northover
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Duncan Wyllie 09 May 2006

A warming embrace through the winter of any night, you really moved me with this fine story-poem, well done, love Duncan

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Shannon Chapel 09 December 2005

Ernestine, Beautifully written. Shannon

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Sid John Gardner. 02 December 2005

Nice one Ernestine.The coat I had on was a Snorkel and got as far as the Co-op but she'd gone.Last seen at the bacon counter.Cant beat a good romance. Great read thanks for sharing. Sid John.

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Mary Nagy 25 November 2005

We're getting lots of beautiful snow now Ernestine......just enough to add some beauty and romance! I love it. What a great poem. Sincerely, Mary

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Uriah Hamilton 25 November 2005

sweet, I'm about to go out the door into the Michigan cold, but not expecting this type of luck.

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Cj Heck 25 November 2005

This is so beautiful, Ernestine. I love poems like this - I have goosebumps all up and down my arms. Again, beautiful. Hugs to you, CJ

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