Monday, September 20, 2010

Snow White Comments

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There was a girl white as snow.
But then she fell really low.
She got dirty, didn't know how to get clean.
All of the mysteries were unseen.
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Anna Petrashishina
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Khairul Ahsan 10 January 2014

Your poem is beautiful. A sweet girl as white as snow got dirtied, muddied but again she stood up amid challenges and got herself cleaned. A positive thought. 'Now her life is great because she had courage to stand up for what is right. She has a battle to fight.' - These lines are very inspiring! Well done!

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