Tuesday, February 16, 2010

Snow Storm Comments

Rating: 4.5

watching the snowfall from the window sill
with a cup of coffee grounded in the mill

untouched unscathed innocent pure
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Asim Burman
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Lynn Glover 17 February 2010

Beautiful work Asim and I truly enjoy the way you draw your reader into the poem. I love the rhyming of each verse, which to me is true poetry. Thanks for the invite and I give you a 10++++ Your friend Lynn

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Eduard Popescu 16 February 2010

'I hear each flake land around'=>> this is so big, like majestic ^_^. Beautiful poem

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