Saturday, May 2, 2020

Snow Palace Comments

Rating: 5.0

It is in the land
of destruction
I am assigned
to build a new palace
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Dr. Erfan K
COMMENTS
Thomas Case 24 September 2021

Good job

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Indira Renganathan 05 August 2021

A simple poem with a heavy content.... heart-stirring poem full score

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Jazib Kamalvi 06 May 2020

A good start with a nice poem, Erfan Kappil. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 May 2020

snow palaces are built for kids you must be one such a loved one o poet of PH.. Take care friendless poet be aware CORONA IS FORCING HUMAN DISTANCE SO TAKE care never stare us your mask let her keep closed eyes none will you despise rise read my poems quickly you will raise also... in the case of lovers they embrace each other and become one so oneness is the mood of cold..you friend to her are sold now be as BOLD

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 04 May 2020

Wow a great metaphorical poem on hopeless feel. But pray and you will feel contented and Allah can make dreams come true. Kudos. Plz do read and comment my newest poem too, titled, ' miraculous birds seen in sacred sanctuary'

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Erfan K Wandoor 04 May 2020

Thanks zaynab for your comments on the poem. Sure I am curious on reading your poem.

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Erfan K Wandoor 04 May 2020

Thanks zaynab for your comment. Sure I am curious to read your poem

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