Thursday, November 26, 2020

Snow, On The Eve Of Lockdown Comments

Rating: 4.5

Once again, sitting quietly outside the grocery store
Snow was falling down in a steady unhurried journey
Not as the last time, when that sudden mini blizzard struck
As written about in "Snow Fell into A Blizzard" last April
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Ratnakar Mandlik 27 November 2020

The flight of imagery that linked snowfall and lockdown imposed due to pandemic as also the style of narration are superb. Thanks for sharing.

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Khairul Ahsan 26 November 2020

'A pure white candescence blanketing jaded autumn growth' - a nice, poetic expression, par excellence! Loved the concluding stanza, beautiful! This is what a poet does; whatever he sees, expresses in such a beautiful waythat the readers can also see the imagery in their mind. The poem, so well written, deserves full marks and I gladly give it: 5 Stars *****! I recommend this poem to be selected as the 'Member Poem of the Day' for any day soon.

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Deanna Samuels

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