Friday, December 14, 2007

Snow Is Cold (A Rhime Type Poem) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Snow is Cold
Specially when yur old
When you are not so old
Snow does not seem so cold
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Billy Bob Noes
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Not a member No 4 15 December 2007

Billy Bob - it made me smile, and I like the play on rime and rhyme.. I noticed how you did that by the way! So for the originality, the humour, the insight in the true character of snow - none of yer superficial dross was it... - and the sheer brevity of the poem bit.. I think a ten at least would be in order! jim

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John Nightingale 14 December 2007

Well I liked it a lot.10

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Billy Bob Noes 14 December 2007

Thanks for your vote and for reading the poem voting rules. You done good. (10 is a good vote)

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