Snow is Cold
Specially when yur old
When you are not so old
Snow does not seem so cold
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Thanks for your vote and for reading the poem voting rules. You done good. (10 is a good vote)
Billy Bob - it made me smile, and I like the play on rime and rhyme.. I noticed how you did that by the way! So for the originality, the humour, the insight in the true character of snow - none of yer superficial dross was it... - and the sheer brevity of the poem bit.. I think a ten at least would be in order! jim