Sunday, April 8, 2018

Snow In April Comments

Rating: 5.0

April storm brings a brush of snow.
Heart marvels at it's pure white glow.

Earth has no means to hold on to it
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Savita Tyagi
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Muzahidul Reza 14 May 2018

Snow is also nataural beauty like other beauties and here in your poem April snow is marvelously painted, great done, thanks for sharing the poem with us

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Bipasha D 03 May 2018

Lovely poem that flows beautifully. Last two lines speak a lot..A 10 for this.

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Susan Williams 27 April 2018

When I was 16, I was on spring break and it was lovely spring weather and all of a sudden it started snowing out of a blue and puffy white cloud day! ! ! ! My horse thought it as odd as I thought it! ! I hope it isn't a sign of global warming but if it is stick your hand out and grab yourself a snow star! ! Beautifully written and so many lines flow like silk!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 18 April 2018

Glee of April snow is beautifully depicted. Scientists may say it is global warming but all we see is what happens with a warm heart.

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Loke Kok Yee 18 April 2018

As we age, sometimes events happening brings back memories of pain or joy from years gone by and they are moments to be treasured. Thank you for the memories.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 April 2018

I find that you have got deep proclivity for Snow! The way you have expressed your thoughts is utterly captivating! I appreciate your longing to catch the fleeting moment of joy...The short lived stars fall upon my hand/Soon to disappear in a fleeting moment....Loved reading it.

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Valsa George 09 April 2018

Snow at an unanticipated time of the year is greeted with much excitement! This gives a sense of coolness and disappears fast on the warm surface of the Earth! Coming and going in the wink of an eye! Nature gives such sudden surprises! A beautiful poem!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 April 2018

Storm of snow amazes mind and we feel this storm and nature's thrill. Cycle of season doesn't support it. so, this provokes thought. We perceive snowflakes smash on the ground and beauty of nature that is treasured. Mind perceives pleasure from certain things. This poem is very excellently penned with rich imagery...10

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