Monday, June 15, 2009

Snow Fall Comments

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You, me, in the snow...
Flakes falling in our hair,
Foreheads touching under the dormant trees.
Looking at eachother,
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Savannah Satrk
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Marisol Smith 26 June 2009

Lovely poem...I love the amount of detail and intonation you put into your poems...keep writing! -Mare :)

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