From today, March 1st,
This sunny day,
To 8th of March
Most women of my land
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Snow drops or cold climes of Snow flakes.. they always come in such greetings that tell me just Hold on I am just nature and you are Part of Nature! ! .. Don't ever fear looking at me Nature, be brave and stay! !
Sweet flowers carry sweetness and beauty. Spring comes and goes far giving us memory. Inside hearts love remains. Snow drops are special in perception. Very nice and vivid imagery is drawn here is interesting.10
'There he is! As in her secret thoughts At her own door: Holding a bunch of gentle little snow drops. She'll have those sweet flowers Then he will be paid instead Only one warm but sweetest kiss! Yet! For the spring to come, He needs A thousand! ' loved the progression of this, to the first kiss we add a score, then almost a thousand more, so sweet so gentle the snowdrops call :)
what a lovely poem snowdrops for a kiss all the fellows must be picking them the more kisses the merrier, a great heartfelt tradition to write for a poem thank you...regards
what a lovely poem snowdrops for a kiss all the fellows must be picking them the more kisses the merrier, a great heartfelt tradition to write foer a poem thank you...regards
Oh, this is so lovely, Elena my smiling friend! For the first time I am hearing of this tradtion or folk tale! Is it the myth behind the arrival of spring? Or is it just a figment of your imagination, I wonder! But it is a delightful fancy! I love the barter deal..... A boquet of flowers for a lovely kiss! Enjoyed!
Reading this again... months later... with spring just a distant memory... the word of your poem are sweeter still... many kind thoughts dear poetress... :)
Delightful! I wish spring could hear your words, I believe she would pounce upon us... like a playful child come to their parents bedroom at morning's first light....spreading flowers and kisses of her own, enough to satisfy the heart's desire.
The last stanza is so wonderful! She'll have those sweet flowers Then he will be paid instead Only one warm but sweetest kiss! Yet! For the spring to come, He needs A thousand! ' Wow! A heart refreshing poem!
I think the poem is perfectly crafted. One of the best poems of Elena - as far as I have read her....
A very lovely, sweet and enjoyable read. And nice humor included (smile) ... A very nice re-telling of tradition from your homeland... You gave us an enchanting mind picture of words... MoonBee
Absolutely beautiful! Loved the poetic painting of words, , And here is a tiny kiss for you *: D
‘women give men a bit more then a much /too little- tiny kiss! ! ’ women are emotionally ahead for always some extra …caught metaphorically...befitting …nice diction 10/10 Ms. Nivedita UK
Therefore as for that for you the only ' from which is, I perhaps you say; Perhaps, just my praying: In the same way and the family to the woman gives that person more from the person, from whom it should give, desires as for the greatly excessively small small butterfly for the family which kisses to........... iip
A very sweet tradition poetically described. But I wonder, in a village full of courting men and women, does it happen when the fields are denuded, fist fights breakout for the lvery ast snow drop? 10+