Pillowy powder
Falls from the sky,
I gaze in wonder,
As the white flakes fly.
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You have painted a nice picture of the snowflakes dancing in the sky. Truly only a poet would have thought of this. Well done!
Fantastic narration of snow fall, in the form of silent dance of snow flakes. Enjoyed the beautifully portrayed nature during snow fall. Thanks.10 points.
lovely.. the dance of snow flakes in silent motion.. the stillness and the white so clearly visualized.. thanks for sharing
A beautiful poem on flying snowflakes. Soothing to read. Enjoyed.
Gary What a wonderful poem I can just feel all those snow flakes dancing around my garden but I have to tell you I ponly like snow when I am indoors. It's a great poem. cheers Sylvie
thank you Gary! I love snow and this poem definitely has a feeling for snow. A lovely poem to start my day with...!
Beauty is a fleeting thing often captured only in a single moment, a snapshot in time.Wonderful poem, Gary. Warm regards, Sandra
This could be a really beautiful song