Saturday, May 10, 2014

Snow But Sand Comments

Rating: 5.0

I sit with my knees drawn to my chest,
a heavy jumper evelopes me, snug and warm,
a cup of hot chocolate with bobbing marshmellow pillows,
sends heat waves through my hands and up my arms.
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TheNameless Poet
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A peculiar situation of destruction by nature and its after effect and close observation through the eyes by the poet made into a beautiful poem. wonderful.

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Hope Janson 10 May 2014

Your poem has a suddenness about it, it is worth reading.

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