Snow Comments

Love this poem

i honestly think that 2 of them are dead because over the lake where they were it would give off a reflection but not just any reflection a reflection thats faded and distorted reasons being water is in constant motion and the ice sheet would have a textured layer

yes, its really sounds like a robot (((

Lokathile Ettavum Valiya Nashicha Pottakavitha Kanikandu Ente Divasam Kolammakkithannathinu Orupadu Deshyam Niranja Karyanga lAriyichukollunnu....

" I pointed to a place where kids had made angels in the snow. For some reason, I told him that a troop of angels had been shot and dissolved when they hit the ground." Wow, wHaT a gReAt pOeM

very cool poem its nice and cool

i am watching this to get a grade?

wow hes like a demon

it sounds like a robot

David Berman

This is a 'Modern Poem'. I am not modern. So regrettably, I didn't understand it at all!

Everything is transitory and only memories remain....very insightful......very well crafted 10++

Today I traded hellos with my neighbor. Our voices hung close in the new acoustics. A room with the walls blasted to shreds and falling. We returned to our shoveling, working side by side in silence. very fine poem. tony

pointed to a place where kids had made angels in the snow. For some reason, I told him that a troop of angels had been shot and dissolved when they hit the ground. angels and kids. a fine poem. tony

Quite a curious little boy! Enjoyable!

This poem is well executed by David Berman. Thanks and congratulations for being chosen this poem as the modern poem of the poem of the day.

Congratulations as The Modern Poem Of The Day. Good poem with extraordinanry fantasy. Impressing.

A great poem that emphasizes the voice of a younger sibling resounding in one's mind. Older brothers and sisters are supposed to have all the answers. Loved it!

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this is a really good poem but I don't understand any of it