Wednesday, April 11, 2012

Snow Comments

Rating: 3.5

As flakes fall softly through the chilling air
And land one on another all around
They cover what was previously bare
Obscuring details of the rocky ground
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Richard Lackman
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Mandi June 13 April 2012

This is a lovely poem. I've always loved snow, and this paints a beautiful picture of its elegance.

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Melissa Carey 11 April 2012

A new one. And another gem! I look forward to more of your poetry! I know you are well published already but, you are more than qualified to publish your writing and poetry! My mom actually printed these out to hold onto! We are memorizing them like we did/do with all our favorite poems!

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Valerie Dohren 11 April 2012

Beautiful Dick - a very good description.

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Richard Lackman

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