Out the window the snow was beautiful
And the mountain in the snow was beautiful
And the tree,
Oh when the snow falls on the tree!
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Afrooz. I have read many of your poems and you do an outstanding job. Not only in the poetic sense, but in translating your thoughts to English. Keep up the good work. Peace
Sure I will keep up dear Kelly with this much of encouraging support I receive from top members like you!
And oh when the snow falls on the trees, Oh how beautiful it can be. These are the top few corrections you requested. Your poem is beautiful.
Great imagery, beautiful display of snow through your poem! Good one! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
Great imagery, I must say you suceeded in taking me to the place where I can see the tree blanketed with snow...Marvelous.....
Thanks for reading!