Snow Comments

Then by the end of the day, As the light begins to slip away, The day becomes darker and the wind colder too, You think of the hot chocolate waiting at home for you. hot chocolate waiting for you on cold winter days. fine feeling.. tony

The contrast between snow(winter) and hot(chocolate) shows that from beginning, you have good talent.

When snow falls winter calls. Really beautiful words of nature comes in poem. Nicely penned.

For your first well done. The poem is relatable and has rhythm