Snoozy Hugs Comments

very strong and emotive lines.... written witha vein of vigour... lovely

Good poetic imagery threaded through your poem! Well done, ; D

Nice art work Uzma! ! 10.. Ali

I think you have a powerful imagination... Just dont stop yourself, while writing... John Keats once wrote in a letter to John Taylor... 'If poetry comes not as naturally as the leaves to a tree it had better not come at all...' I just want to say that dont stop yourself, you are like a tree and leaves will come naturally... the more effort we put to do good poetry, the more we lose the essence of pure soul... and without the purity of soul we can be poets, but not visionaries... i think you got my point here... take care God bless you