Sneha Comments

Setul

Very sweet! It almost sounds like a little sister! And a lover at the same time. Someone very close to you. Great work! Marina...

just beautiful, truly devoted love is devine.and you have written your heart upon the paper.

fine display of poetic license.love it

very beautiful. i enjoy the use of adjectives, it brings out her presence. Golden...is a nice touch..i imagine a beauty with a shimmering golden heart. with arms extended...hands that are ready to be held. i think this is a wonderful and remarkable poem. it expresses a deep devotion. and love...

A wonderful expression of love for another. Many of us want to express these sentiments when it is too late and live with the regret.We sholud never be afraid to express our feelings now.Life is short and no one knows what the next day brings. Sneha :)

Lovely, nice tribute.

I loved this! Right from your heart. Wonderful expression of your loves character and her love. Enjoyed the read!

But she is as pure as the dew, She has never been untrue. And when I am in despair, Even in her silence I feel care. Much you have told poet. Its a belief needs a commitment to carry on a relation till last day and beyond. Beautiful written in favour of love (impersonal) . Give your love sometimes your silence and show her reaction also. perhaps that will also be a new writing. Thank you.....run long......write more...... 10+ pranab

Very nice feeling your poem conveys. We should welcome in love what is there, and not try to change. For such imposition is the resistance in the form of anger, irritation. And shows our demand on love, then love becomes wanting not love. Your writing reflect thsi beautiful attitude on your part. Thanks for inviting...

Right, my friend, We love them as they are. We cannot change any of the eardrum hurting events, but their other side tends to sooo sweet and loving that we happily accept and indeed cannot live without. i think this poem is so realistic and provides such an AHA experience that i want to call it truly wonderful. Somehow deep inside I believe someone who never gets angry with you, does not really love you. (?) . I just try to repair whenever or whatever went wrong before going to sleep (which I consider my golden rule)

..May always love be on your side.Living without affection inside of heart, yes, you are right, that- is the biggest fright!

nice poem..sure she wud d really proud f dis...

mmmmmmm my friend.....did u show this poem to Sneha? She would have been mighty proud of you.

it is nice that u praise your lady love so much.. i hope and pray that it remains the life through. so many experiences evrywhere of love affairs. u seem to be very very fascinated by sneha. very good. my prayers are for you preetam