Saturday, November 1, 2008

# Snapshots Comments

Rating: 2.8

Just across the busy road and the crowded cityscape,
Ocean waves playfully froth and undulate, while I gape.
All you have to do is to turn your back to the city,
And captivated, feel filled with serenity…
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Mamta Agarwal
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premji premji 12 November 2008

mamtaji, i wish a painter like ravivarma would have painted all these snapshots... how wonderful it could have been!

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Raj Nandy 10 November 2008

These beautiful snap shots from memory, when printed in books, When an imaginative poet reads them, they all begin to move! 10! -Raj Nandy

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Sandra Fowler 05 November 2008

Poem pictures of great worth. I can feel the serenity. Very profound last lines. Ten without hesitation. Love, SandraX

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Sathyanarayana M V S 01 November 2008

Mamtaji, You have a great ability to portray real life visuals with your penstrokes. This is really so beautiful

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 01 November 2008

So true Mamta Peace is where one finds it... Andrew 10

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