Snapshot Comments

and thus fill the empty cup of desires with innocent happiness your vivid imagery, before the nightfall is very evocative; its a snapshot captured in words of our incompleteness, emptiness in those deeper recesses of our hearts full of longing and yearning for warmth. thanks Naseer have a look at my poem titled snapshots Regards Mamta

thoughts provoking piece.. makes me think deeply a very wholesome piece...the thoughts are really excellent... extraordinary ideas flowing.. 10++++

Message from Thykkoottathil Ravindran: From: Thykkoottathil Ravindran (Chennai India; Male; 61) To: Naseer Ahmed Nasir Date Time: 4/9/2009 12: 14: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: snap shot hi nasseer ur translated poem is really good. i appreciate ur effort to share with us. ur selfless act is wonderfull.posted 10 for u love & regards surya

Great poem! i love the image of the blood-strewn sand dunes and ripped open body of the sun. Beautiful piece of work! Well Done Mr. Nasir! !

A treat for the mind! it totally carried me away.Thankyou

That was a very wonderful poem. I really enjoyed it. Your creative perception can set images into my head. Thank you. Shyana K

a fantastic snapshot, you got all the images in just one click and clear. Bravo! Another shot?

I deeply think you are an amazing poet, and I wish you keep writing such sentiment. You write with such simplicity, I wonder how much it takes you to write a masterpeice, such as this. You are fantastic! Keep up the grand work, Shelby

I feel a true longing to return to values of importance within the plastic marketplace we're all choking to flee. Most evident is the challenge here for all to take heed, a most powerful technique. Well penned, Naseer! I thoroughly enjoyed this dance of words! Warm regards, John.

from one poet to another, you did good here.

nice poetic imagery... poet painter's emotional brush...10

i can actually visualise the landscape through your eyes such is your powerful, haunting imagery. you have an exceptional vision- seeing the invisible.... and articulating it with such beauty. Best Wishes mamta

I like how fluidly this drips off the tongue...the images created are very haunting, yet absolutely beautiful...nice work.

It took a couple of readings but I was able to get the gist of this writing. It was actually quite creative, if a little obscure. I never know what to make of such as this. It has a place. I'm just not sure where. I recommend a good university setting. GW62

Very nice flow and filled with excellent imagery....

passionate write.......loved the theme..............well done.

There is beauty in this 'Snapshot'. Wonderful read. Keep writing! :) Be Different. Be You. Elizabeth

interestin write .................

Images of terrible beauty painted on the windowpanes of the poet's soul. This is magnificent, Naseer. Ten seems inadequate here. As always, Sandra

Reflections on photo raise to high philosophical level. Contemplations upon time perceotion are really interesting and original.10+