Wednesday, June 14, 2006

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Rating: 5.0

Ever had a moment of real fun?
Playing with water guns under the sun
Or hop like a bouncing ball while screaming
Just to tease others, enjoying the feeling
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Eman Hussain
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Duncan Wyllie 16 June 2006

And each line of this poem has been beautifully crafted, We all have a story to tell, lets do it with feeling A great write and a well-rounded 10 Love Duncan x

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