Saturday, December 5, 2020

Snakes In Wait Comments

Rating: 5.0

People are ungrateful,
Many brains seem
To have shrunk,
And Listen to void
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Sandra Feldman
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 December 2020

A powerful and very incisive write. A depiction of anger and frustration. A cry of.the weaknesses of humanity. Well expressed and presented.

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David Wood 06 December 2020

Sounds like most of our political class They’re all snakes. A good poem with a good use of words.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 06 December 2020

Snakes............to me most horrifying that's why God makes them crawl no walking or wandering constanly myriad of lists lying in the wait brought forth by Snakes in Wait! So well captured and beautifully rendered. 5 Stars Full You speak of Fate Snakes In Wait. Great truth in Full Excellence are crawling in Full appearance. The best read ever about human beings who are snakes in wait actually. Great words in this poem, dear great poetess!

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